Your prelim is proficient - grade C / B. A range of camera shots have been used, mostly well framed. Some shots could be better composed and camera movement could be steadier - don't pan too quickly. Inventive use of sound - a few lapses of continuity when Ryan enter the room. Think about how the speed of the editing can effect pace.
Your prelim is proficient - grade C / B. A range of camera shots have been used, mostly well framed. Some shots could be better composed and camera movement could be steadier - don't pan too quickly. Inventive use of sound - a few lapses of continuity when Ryan enter the room. Think about how the speed of the editing can effect pace.
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